Developmental Edit
Developmental editing is the most in-depth level of fiction editing, focused on strengthening your manuscript’s plot, structure, pacing, characters, worldbuilding, and overall cohesion.
What You’ll Receive
A detailed editorial letter analyzing major story elements
In-manuscript comments with reader insight
A clear revision plan with actionable next steps
Feedback on pacing, character arcs, dialogue, tone, stakes, consistency, and more
Manuscript Critique
A manuscript evaluation provides a professional, big-picture review of your story, offering honest, high-level feedback on what’s working and what needs improvement before deeper edits begin.
This service is ideal for fiction authors who want expert insight into structure, pacing, character development, and reader engagement without the intensive revision process of developmental editing.
What You’ll Receive
A detailed editorial letter outlining strengths and areas for improvement
Feedback on plot, pacing, character arcs, theme, and worldbuilding
Specific examples from the manuscript to support key observations
Actionable revision recommendations
Sensitivity Read
At Story Surgeon, this service supports fiction authors writing across lines of difference, including race, gender identity, sexuality, disability, mental health, religion, trauma, and other lived experiences. The goal is to help you avoid harmful stereotypes and create nuanced, respectful representation that resonates with readers.
What You’ll Receive
A tailored sensitivity report with concerns, questions, and recommendations
Guidance for revising toward more authentic representation
Book Blurb Edit
A strong blurb can make the difference between a skipped book and a sale. Story Surgeon refines your book description into clear, compelling copy that hooks readers, highlights your story’s strengths, and builds intrigue without giving too much away.
What You’ll Receive
A professionally edited and polished book blurb
Stronger hooks, pacing, and readability
Suggestions to improve reader engagement and sales potential
Author Bio Edit
Story Surgeon refines your bio into a clear, engaging introduction that highlights your voice, builds credibility, and aligns with your author brand.
What You’ll Receive
A polished, professionally written author bio
Improved clarity, tone, and flow
Emphasis on credibility, achievements, and genre positioning
A version tailored for your target audience and platform use
The Process
Step One
Deep dive call to diagnose your biggest strengths and weaknesses.
Step Two
A custom strategy blueprint is built around your goals.
Step Three
Receive your deliverables and publish your book at it’s best.